Wow, Nicely done! ..This was definately a great dark poem/collab. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Wrap my lips around your heart!

Omg - that line is amazing and so powerful! I took this to also mean how words can really hit the hard, and capture it.

This poem is strong and very much to be feared - I would not want to be in the receiving end of this double power lol.

The imagery was amazing, and the description of the sea. I like the subtle mystery too, we do not know really what has been defeated, but something has been!

Great collab work you pair!