by LadyPearl Oct 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
A rhythmic beat on the ground; |
I LIKE IT RETURN THE LOVE AND COMMENT MINES |
by Eddy
You have My Vote As a 4/5 :) |
by Arsalan D
Very well written with a beautiful message to it |
Excellent. I love the last stanza the best.. your beat and rhythm was great in this poem, |
I havent seen a poem yet about this. It's very unique, as Tara-Kay said, and i absolutely LOVE unique! The imagery was incredible! It just made me smile as i read the first stanza! wonderful write! |