by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Oct 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I tried a different rhyme scheme, I guess you could say.. |
by Mommy And Me
I realy injoyed the read. great job. |
by Synh
Loved it except in the last stanze, where you used 'cease' twice. Excellent write, though. I really enjoyed reading it. |
^_^ I liked this one a lot. It gave me a real meaning of what's happening in our world, and we're not trying to stop it. |
by ALEX
I am definitely in love with the rhyme scheme. that's so creative. it all rhymes but the second and last sentences' last words are the same! that's so cool!! |
Amazing. |