Wow this is amazing, you are totally bringing so many feelings out in your writing that i have felt, and i am sure many girls have... but about being afraid... i am taking a chance after what you said... thank you so much for the advice, i hope everything is working out well for you

"The beginning is the end
With a middle undefined"

Very strong line hun.
This poem is amazing. I agree with Megan, the feelings that are portrayed in this poem are something that so many people have felt before.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

..How sad. But you know, if love didn't hurt so much and if it wasn't so darn hard.. it wouldn't be worth it.