Broken Hearts Unmended

by Twisted Heart   Oct 19, 2006


We walk upon the sands of time
Along the shores of love we tread
Our toes, we dip into the water
But never one to dunk our heads
We fight the wars of love's dismay
As words of hope are cut and lost
Scattered pieces of our souls
Our hearts, the ones that bare the cost.
Into the future we can't wander
For memories broken, now are cast
They've left us lifeless, with weighted wings
And stilled us in our given paths.
To hold a heart with just fingertips
And let it blow with gentle ease
Would be the carelessness of faith
That drifts away with just a breeze.
So, though, we choose to walk among
The other souls that lay in wait
We let the water mist our toes
And pass along our loveless days.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I know I left a comment before but I reread it in a contest entry and it just reminded me how much I love it! It's one of my favorite poems because of it's wonderfully descriptive and visually captivating analogies. Great job! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Gee willigers! That was amazing. It sounded so professional. You amaze me with your talent Darling. This one had so much depth behind your words. And then ending was perfect for it. Keep it up!

    5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I liked this poem a lot. Nice job! Jpoet*