I liked this poem a lot. Nice job! Jpoet*

Gee willigers! That was amazing. It sounded so professional. You amaze me with your talent Darling. This one had so much depth behind your words. And then ending was perfect for it. Keep it up!

5/5

-Jenna.

I know I left a comment before but I reread it in a contest entry and it just reminded me how much I love it! It's one of my favorite poems because of it's wonderfully descriptive and visually captivating analogies. Great job! Jpoet*