I can really relate to this . |
This poem is AMAZING! Your rhyming flowed perfectly! I LOVE the last three stanzas the best! |
People can be so mean.. Keep your head up.. Everything should get better soon. Good luck babe. 5/5 |
by Sweet lig
Hmm i love the all lines i really feel the emotion.. i think im the one in this situation. very nicely written great job5/5 |
Although not my favourite it was the best technically written poem you gave me to look at. again very emotional about about someone that has hurt you so much, keep it up. |
Great!! I love the emotian in the poem. Love the rhyming. Great flow. A truly great poem! Keep them up becuase there great!! xx |
by Minkus
You had good rhythm throughout this poem and it had a strong, though harsh, message that you portrayed well. 5/5; excellent job. |
by Angelmom
You are very talented. |
by Ashley Ann
OOOHH...Nice poem! :D I dont see a think wrong with it. 5/5 |
by Tammie
Wow! I love it. My favorite stanza's are the fourth and sixth one. I can relate to this alot! Keep it up! =] 5/5 |
by awww
Awww.... the emotion was so well expressed i felt it through my heart... the rhyming was great... you've got talent... the flow and meaning were there... all i can say is wow... great job keep writing! |
by kelS;
Wow its really good because you can relate to it really good. the rhyming was really good and its really easy to follow! good job! 5/5 |
Aww wow. A very deep and touching poem. =) But I didn't think it should be in the friends section. I know it could be under broken friendship, but I personally would've rather put it in the sad poems. |
by Sarah Ann
Aww, what a beautiful poem. Your words flowed through my heart, they were so very touching. I am amazed. I simply loved this, and I am glad you have asked for me to come around. Wonderful work my friend. 5/5 |
This was a great poem. |
by Becky
Wow this poems is really great, the words you chose fit greatly in with the mood, it flowed so easily no stopping and trying to figure out what it meant. great work keep it up |
by Kristina
Wow this is sad but i can really relate to it. i like it a lot. i think you did a wonderful job writing it. so much emotion in it. keep writing! 5/5 |
by BooBa
So sad:( sometimes i feel the same way.. keep writiting ur rrly good |
Hey. you're such an awesome writter. your choice of words really makes all the difference. just simple words like fling, really give it something special, in comparison to many poems. i absoloutly love the last stanza though: |
That was great 5/5 |