The Girl That Seemed 'Perfect' .

by BrokenREALiTy   Oct 20, 2006


Beautiful and kind,
The queen of society.
She was the epitome of beautiful,
With a model-like body.

With long well-toned legs,
And those pink, full lips.
She was beautiful enough,
To make every boy's heart skip.

With white porcelain skin,
And large brown eyes.
She was honest and truthful,
But when needed, told lies.

Her hair was long and black,
Her stomach toned and flat.
She was extremely well-mannered,
From the way she talked to the way she sat.

She was hated by many girls,
But wanted by many guys.
Yet every time she's fell in love,
She's had to say good-bye.

Quiet and timid,
She'd be loud when she wanted to.
Though violent at times,
It just showed that she loved you.

But behind it all,
She hid a broken smile.
Even with such admiration,
The happiness only lasted a while.

No one knew,
What went on in that house of hers.
But it's something so horrible,
You'd think she was cursed.

Her father would take her,
Almost every day.
He'd violated her in almost,
Every imaginable way.

She kept it to herself,
No matter how much it hurt,
In fear that if they knew,
They'd treat her like dirt.

So she started to cut,
Her wrists covered in bloody trails.
She thought that no one would understand,
Why she does it when all else fails.

But if only someone,
Had bothered to see if she was OK,
Then maybe, just maybe,
She'd be alive today.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

Some stanzas don't rhyme well or the lines don't go well together, but I'll edit this later. Feedback, criticism, comments?

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  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    That was a very beautiful story!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, very sad poem. I thought you had a great flow and everything just worked well together in this one. You're a fantastic writer, I have read some of your other stuff and you are very good! :) 5/5

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