Comments : Fed up

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    A little short but meaning from the begining to end i liked the flow especially those

    for what just the thought that I've helped someone.
    For i know most of the time
    I won't be appreciated at all.

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I liked this poem. you coudve probably expanded upon it. but the shortness was good. the third line could be fixed though. it isn't good for the structure.

    overall it is good.

    that is all. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem wonderfully done thanks for the comment;) lol

    keenan