by Tricky Daze
A little short but meaning from the begining to end i liked the flow especially those |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I liked this poem. you coudve probably expanded upon it. but the shortness was good. the third line could be fixed though. it isn't good for the structure. |
by Corruption
This is a great poem wonderfully done thanks for the comment;) lol |