Putting out this smoke, I should quit...I know.

My rear view is smashed; "There's no looking back..."

^^I really liked those two lines. The first one because I smoke, and I know I need to quit. It's disgusting, lol. & The second because.. I always feel like Everything in my past is ruined and there's no way I can go back and fix things. So yesh. I loved those lines. ;P

The poem was very nicely done, too! I enjoyed it alot. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Great poem, and I love the title

Lovely poem. I really liked it. Keep up the good work. =]