This is so sad-as a love poem and poem of loss.It really brought the emotion out in my heart.I know this feeling under different circumstances-but the pain and loss are still there.Hang in there though, things change, things get better.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow very good!!! and inspiring!! i like this poem a lot has great emotions! well written!! =]]

Wonderful peom though i think it is kinda sad to be in the love section lol but great poem i hope you have gotten your kids back you seem too looovvveeee them tons tons tons i dont see why they would have been taken away:S but great poem

keenan

Beautiful is really all I can say 2 discribe this poem