Tired Of Deceit (Strike 3)

by Natalie   Oct 20, 2006


Rainbow replaced overcast cloud,
Sunlight shone above hidden trees,
Winter snow melted underground,
Earths core established memories.
(Strike one: You were lying to me.)

Unworthy trust handed to hearts,
No protection for unhealed sores,
Arms wide open assuming best,
Unprepared for upcoming wars.
(Strike two: You lied to me again.)

Moon's shadow taking its last toll,
Stars dimming within murky skies,
Downpour of rain soon expected,
You can't control your heart of lies.
(Strike three: I'm tired of deceit.)

20th October 2006
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  • 18 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    Ooh, wow Taleee! This was awesome! I love the phrases written in parenthesis, they are very effective and give the poem its own flavor. The flow was great as was the rhyme scheme. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing. Wonderful work hun 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done Nat, another great poem. Really sad, and it makes me wonder if you're ok. Or you're probably just like me, and write about anything and everything! lol, well hope things are good take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    AWESOME poem i loved it. it's really really good. nice work keep it up shanik

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow! I love the whole concept of this poem. The strike idea is really unique and stand out from the rest. I love every bit of the poem. My favorite line has to be:

    You can't control your heart of lies.

    A very well written write! 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Creative-- not only the meaning itself, but also the endings of each stanza-- the title makes a lot more sense after reading the poem. Nice job! 5/5.

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