Later year I only cry,

^^For some reason, this line here just didn't click inside my little brain. Maybe I'm not reading it right or something, I dunno. :P

It was a great poem though. The ending was my favorite part. So much emotion and effort was put into this piece, and it really shows. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Thats such a sad poem.
You made it rythme i'd say
this was the best poem ive read in a while it has such detail and emotion runnign through it.
great job
xoxroxyxox

Very well done! Full of emotion and very clear on what this poem was about! Thank you very much for the comments! 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

Again beautiful. sorry i can't kepe up wiht all ur poems, i don't go on this site as much as i used to. : S lol. LOVE U! snoo