Tears [Pleiades]

by Tammie   Oct 20, 2006


Tricking slowly down my
Tear-stained face, leaving a
Trail of memories and
Thoughts, captured in many
Tears, each holding countless
Tiny pieces of my
Tattered and broken heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Very nice..short but detailed...keep it up, thx for ur comments,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Aww this was so sad, but very well written once again. You have a wide range of poetry talent.. I'm impressed :] 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very unique write. I really liked it. Please look at the poems and rate them and comment them because of you and My worse fear it would mean alot. 5/5

    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Ooooo its been awhile since I read a good Pleiades poem.I think sad or dark poems for a Pleiades poem is the hardest to write. Very good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was a very sad poem. But beautifuly written. You're mastering this style, and I love it! Keep it up!

    Natalie``