My goodbye

by *gothic_suicide*   Oct 20, 2006


Life is too overwhelming
haven't i suffered enough
why can't you just leave me the he** alone
i just want all this to end
blood is pouring down both my wrist
i don't want to be with u anymore
can't you see you've hurt me for the last time
I'm dying slowly
my last request is to see you suffer
no more putting up with your problems
you whine about everything
I'm sick of us fighting
It's through
I've checked my one way ticket in
I can feel the changes taking place
I'm on my way to the black abyss
my blood is running thin
I'm starting to feel dizzy
My last words are F**k the world
It's over I'm done
thanks for helping me relize what i already knew
i didn't need you YOU needed me
but it's too late now
one last breath and I'm gone
so here it goes goodbye

written by: heather sims
age:16
time- 4:21 a.m.
date: 6/24/06

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Loved the poem
    especially the bit about the one last breath
    truly beautiful poem
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, soo feeling this piece
    it's obvious it means a lot and the emotion is deep and so easy for me to relate to, i've been there i know how it feels and i hope it will get better tbh
    anyways, really good poem, keep it all up
    5/5
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Eddie

    Powerful words to say to ther person u love the most.... but I feel you cause I just went through the same four months ago, I never thought I'd get over this one chick but I did and I'm happy, if i could do it so can u.

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