It's a good poem, but why not go a little deeper into the feelings of the widow? what made her something that attracted your attention?

The reason why i didnt go into detail about the widow was because what was said was enough to convey how the widow felt at that time.

I think you said what needed to be said eloquently and within a frame that didn't dwell on some inner misery of your own. It examined everything it needed to examine beautifully.

Wow this is great 5/5