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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Terrific poem!! I know exactly what you are expressing through this one. I have felt very very similar pain. I like how you expressed your message. keep up the good work
    xox.kayla.xox

  • 18 years ago

    by anthony

    Poem good emotion sad :(....at least u felt the joys of love... but what follows when love was not true