It's lonley and sad. hope you're not feeling this way. I liked it, I see how hard everything can feel. good stuff :)

That is a great poem. :)

Well written , contains deep emotions . While reading it, I thoght there were a couple of grammatical errors, but idk .maybe it`s just me . Good poem tho (:
..ღ__MiNDYY

And now I can't say on my two feet.

[I think you meant "stay" ..not say. I could be wrong though.. ]

Maybe sometimes I got to give in.

[This line would work alot better if you replaced "got" with "have"]

This pain stays, and feels like dirt.

[To be honest, I didn't really like this line... Using "dirt' felt forced.]

Overall, it was a very sad poem. & I hope you're not going through something like this. I liked the ending alot too, It brought the poem together with a great intense clash. Great job!

Natalie``

It was a good poem. I think that some of your wording didn't quite fit it in or have as powerful an effect as you would have liked, but overall it was well done and you could definitely feel the emotion in your poem. Nice job! Jpoet*

WOW ur poem was so excellent, i give it a 5/5, keep on doing a good job

Aw, such a sad poem. It's hard when friends are there to help you when they should be. I know the feeling well, its terrible. You wrote this poem with pure emotion, and i can feel it while i was reading it. A great poem overall. =] 5/5

Such a sad poem but a great read, I liked the emotion in it.
~Kyra~

That was so sad i hope ur not really going though that but it was a great poem!!!
xoxo

Really sad poem. i hope it isn't true, if it is then just be strong and keep ur chin up. overall great write. good work.

sophie:)

ps. wuld love ur opinion on a few of mine

Wow this was have a great flow.. too much emotin its deeply touch my heart wonderful job5/5

Wonderful write... expressed yourself so good... i can feel the emotion and loneliness... my heart feels the need of a savior or at least a true friend... loved this poem so much... keep writing!

~angel~

Great structure and emotive words..
i rallt like it
keep writing ur gifted

5/5 great work keep writing

I thought this poem was really goodd. the words were really good and its easy to relate to.. your really good at writing poems you can relate to good job! 5/5

Aww hunny. This poem sounds like you need a friend, but you don't want to let your other one(s) go. =( I'll be here if you ever need to talk.

The poem...It was very sentimental, moving and touching again. It reminds me of just last year and the fights and stuff that was happening. I got through it and so will you. =) There was good flow in most parts, but some parts could be better.

The title should be: [My Worst Fear]. You just had it in the wrong tense. =P

[Forgive me for I know {I} failed.]
Correction:{I've}

[Who knew I {drug} all these years.]
Correction: {drugged}

Just a few minor corrections I noticed. =) Keep 'em coming! 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Beautiful poem. Very moving, and gripping. I love your precise sense of wording, they are so strikingly sad...you ended it so good too! Wonderful work, keep it up!

This wasnt so good as the last but still made me feel the same feeling 'cept not so strong.

A good job
4/5
I hope you'll never quit this gift.
~Emma

Amazing

I loved it!!!!! Who cares if people think you had "grammer errors"!!! I understood it and it touched me!!!!!
~*love me not*~