Great job on this poem i loved it.. again great job keep it up!

Such a beautiful sad penned, writing well with beautiful expressive emotions,.....well done!

Good poes with strong emotions. ur rhyming was good but the rhymes are kinda old school. make up ur new stuff. find words that ur not quite sure if rhyme and use them. even if they sound close. it really makes an interesting read. great poem! 5/5

This is such a good poem. it makes me think about my old relationship and the way that it ended.

This is a very well written poem, and you choose your words well, i loved the fact that your rhyming scheme did not feel forced. i could feel the anger and sadness throughout this poem. however i feel that the ending line was prehaps rather weak. not critasising, just maybe you should think about changing it. *just some friendly advise*
Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

DAMN!!!! So many memories of mine came rushing back...GREAT job on this one, you said exactly whats on my mind, what I htink about, and what I wanna say to my ex....Its awesome, keep up the good work! : )

Aww like your poem

I loved this poem...it was like you can read my mind see I just got out of a relationship and this poem was exactly what was on my mind...it was sad yet so true....

I love your poem....

I liked your poem. The only thing I noticed was that your ryhme scheme changed in the 2nd to last stanza...or at least it sounds that way when you read it. But overall it was a nice poem! Jpoet*

I really liked this poem!...keep up the good work!

I like this poem. It flows very well and full of emotions.

This is a very very good write.
I fell in love with it.
Your a good writer.

AWWWW....i loved it you did an amazing job...how long did it take you to write it??Well it doesnt even matter... beautiful *tears*

WAY good.

God mindy.
yu write such good poems.
its so truly amazin'

keep writin, my best friend.