Real love...

by kelS;   Oct 21, 2006


We all say there is no love in our lives..

We seem to be happy when we're in love, with love, and be loved,

We seem to be sad when we're out of love, without love, and not loved,

We seem to be angry when we're upset in love, upset with love, and upset to be loved,

Yet we always say that we don`t have love in our lives, we don`t have love with us and nobody loves us,

Clearly love is all around us.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I totaly agree. This poem is true!. 5/5!
    Thanks for the comment it was greatly appreciated!

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I think that the thought put behind this was very deep. I didn't think love being around us, even when we aren't in love was true. But you showed me that it is. A great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I didn't think flow was intentional, so I won't say that there is no flow. =P

    This is clearly a very well written poem. It had emotion, and reminds us that love is around us and that we learn from mistakes and such. Very good read. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Sorry-- I made a typo when I was writing your typos lol.

    Correction: "Seam should be "seem".

    Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Typos: "sea" should be "seem"
    "were" should be "we're"
    "with-out" should be "without"

    Sorry, had to get that part over with. All together, this poem is quite good, especially for being so short. It has an unique, interesting meaning, which is the most important part of a poem. But the flow is a little off and the word choice could be better. Nice ending, though!

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