Im hurting inside

by Sweet lig   Oct 21, 2006


Why does love hurt so much?
Why pain inside is hard and awful?
Why I need to feel like
Everything goes so wrong
And I'm gonna go insane!

Why he didn't feel
That my love was for real!
Why he keep on thinking
That I'm cheating on him
And I'm with someone else

I really love him so much
But he didn't seem to care!
I dont think he understand
How much i need him there
I'm so lost w/out him and confused

I thought i found the one,
I thought this love was true,
I thought i was inlove
And no one can compare!
but it ended really bad

I always ask my self
Is he really love me?
Is he really care about me?
Is he really happy w/me?
Maybe it was a lie,
Or maybe it is true!

I wish that he could tell me
Coz I'm only think of him
And my heart beats only for him
My love for him is so true
And forever will be true!

Should i let him go?
Should i say..bye to him?
And this is the end of everything?
Or should i wait to heal the wounds
And begin from the start!

I wish hes here w/me,
I wish i could touch him,
I wish he can see me,
I wish he can feel what i feel right now,
That's why he knows how my HEART, is...

Hurting inside!

i write this poem for someone who really hurt my feelings.. i love him so much and he say he really love me too but he don't trust me, he never believe on me.. i wish someday he could realize that I'm always true w/ him and i did not cheating on him.. despite of that I'm still love him and i wish he still love me too.

dalring believe me.. iloveyou and this is true and i never cheat on u

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah

    That was very heartbreaking.. ilove those lines very touching piece 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very touching, it sounds like it is written straight from the heart, like all those raw thoughts and emotions that go through our heads when we are in great pain. This is filled with feelings from the beginning to the end.
    Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm.
    I'm sorry that he hurt your feelings, but I just didn't feel it in the poem. I didn't get the emotions throughout the poem, and it was rather cliche. =/ Sorry.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, although I noticed a lot of spelling errors such as the 'is he love me' should be Does he love me, which kind of kept throwing me off.
    But apart from the grammar errors, I could see that a lot of emotion went into this, which is why I continued to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    "Is he really love me?
    Is he really care about me?"

    the first two lines should start with Does not Is I would believe to make since because it was kinda hard to read it with Is instead of Does.

    also
    "Coz I'm only think of him"
    should be thinking of him not think of him.

    but other then that you did an amazing job && it does suck having someone think that you are the one to cheat && you can say so many words but words don't solve much but i really hope he does understand now && that's how my boyfriend is acting lately so i don't know.. but thanks for sharing this poem. Your very talented.

    keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

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