Another great write! Except the flow was a little shaky on this one and in the last stanza you wrote:

And I know now is too late

You should have wrote:

And I know now it is too late

I think that way would have made it better. I also think you should tighten up the flow a little bit so it can be easier to read through. But over-all this is another wonderful poem. Welcome to my favorites 5/5

Love
Letty

Very nicely written, though some parts the rhyming sounded a little awkward. good job. you express emotions very vividly. especially in this line: "My heart can't help but smile" --4/5!

I love how you personified your heart a little. Great poem 5/5 btw you show emotion very well in poems :D

Very good, I liked your vocabulary. Your emotion really winds through the poem. I love the last stanza
Great Job
5/5

It wasn't bad, i liked it. it could have flowed better and i think you forced the lines to rhyme, poems don't always have to rhyme. It just rocked the flow a bit.
but a good write
xxxxx

A great read!! I liked the vocab you used through it. A really nice poem! Keep it up! xx

I really liked this poem. It's filled with so much emotion and you described everything so well in this. I absolutely loved this. The last stanza really brought the whole poem together and left me completely in love with it. Amazing job on this! 5/5

Beautifully penned, wonderful flow, and great imagery! I love this poem and i've added you to my FAVORITES!!! Great job! =D

xxEvilAngelxx

Beautiful message.. but I'd have to agree with those who commented on the flow of the poem.. Such a great write.. I'm sure you still have things you may want to add to make this poem a masterpiece.. Made all the more special because I know why this poem was written.. Keep writing and stay the same!!

Love it. I've been in your situation before, so I could relate. The rhyming seemed a little off now and again, but overall it was very, very well written. :)

Great again!

a few minor errors but nothing serious.
All I hear 'tis because of treason
..huh?

Never did I mean to hurt you
And I know now it's too late
What's left for me to do
But to sit here and wait
i think this does need some work.
i do a thing where i read a stanza then i rewrite it the way i would rewrite it if it was my own.
so heres my rewrite

Never did I mean for you to get hurt
But I know now that it's too late
Please tell me what's left for me to do
Except to just sit here and wait for you

do with this what you will but i do this to show poeple options. i mean please do not copy this. but use if for maybe some guidance on what you could do. =]

x3 Lauren

I liked this.

I thought the flow was a little off in some places, but apart from that it was a wonderful write.