Aww that's stink :[ Not the poem but your friends excluding You.. at least You still have us here [bet that makes you feel so much better :P]

Well done on a very sad, but very well written poem. 5/5 xx

I feel so sorry for you. If you ever need to talk or complain about them I'm here :). I kno wat its like, i get rejected all the time. Nice poem by the way.

Xcellent poem, and I like how you phrase many of your phrases. A sad poem but also a great one...XP

That seriously blows. wut jerks. id confront them about it...but some people are just weird about having certain people in places together...idk. been there done that, b ought that tshirt,....and matching hat. but i like the way u made a story in a poem...nice job, thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

Loved it. Great flow and I can relate to this poem on a few occasions. :) 5/5 Keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

I'm sry sweetheart, it is still really good

I'm sorry to hear that... I know how you feel though. I would just say to them something like: maybe we could all go to dinner this weekend--- It would show them how you feel but at the same time tell them that you still want to do things with them. The poem is actually really good! The rhyming, flow, and all--- Keep up the good work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Wonderful poem. i really like the rhyming. but your "friends" are evil jerks and you should ditch them for better people. =] good luck!

Aww, *hugs*
Ya, my friend Patricia does this to me all the time, she has invitiations and she gives everyone one but me. I've known her since the 3rd grade.. yeah shes a b*t*h But hey, I have other friends..

I usuallly choose which stanzas I like the best but I like them all.

Excellent,
5/5

If you really want to go with them why not ask to go along and see what pitiful excuse they come up with then. Honestly, it's no good getting upset over what their doing and you're not, just think, well I can do things with other friends or on my own that's just as good. Or again, if you really want to go with them, just ask, and if they say no you'll know just how worth hanging around with them is.
Good vent write anyway, hope things get cleared up soon.

Aww.. I'm really sorry about that. I hope that you are doing ok.. But you did an amazing job keeping the flow and rhtyhm of the poem :) .. It's something that I think people can relate to. Great job on this. 5/5 Stay strong && Keep writing!

Great poem but really sad what happened. I'm sorry for what did happen..

But none the less, great poem!

Gee. this is a sad poem. now you have to think. are they your friends? real friends.

if i were your friend i would include you in all times we all go out. i would be the friend.

i love it. i felt this story line and words just interwined perfectly. 5/5

david