Fallen Down

by secret.poet   Oct 21, 2006


(This is actually the chorus to a song i wrote, but it makes a good poem too)

She doesn't smile anymore, she gave it all to you
I can see her chest bleeding, her hearts been torn in two
I can see the tears in her eyes, but they don't fall
They've run dry
Cos shes broken
Broken inside
Shes lost
Lost her sight
She doesn't make a sound
The angels fallen down.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    I liked it a lot! keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    You can tell it it part music the way the words sing to a beat!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    I like it. Post the entire song as a poem....I would like to read the rest. The Lizard King was a brilliant poet and it was reflected in the music of the doors. Encore!

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    I love it! I love the repitition u've used and the rhyme pattern in the last few lines! 5/5 well done!

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