Nature at work ( HAIKU)

by Letty   Oct 21, 2006


Thunder and lightning
Join together to create
Nature's musical.

I'm trying something different. Everyone keep saying that my work needs a different touch so please be truthful I can take the pain.

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A haiku is a Japanese poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Letty,
    Your syllable count is perfect, wording is perfect ....I have to say the entire piece is just perfect.

    And yes, I have to say a Haiku appears to look easily done but it can sometimes take longer to write than a 4 stanza poem. 3 little lines and a total of 17 syllables can sometimes take forever to create....

    Very enjoyable read Letty !
    Take care, Luanne

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Unique style penned, though simply, but you know how to write something different!...marvellous!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Haiku's are my favourite type of nature poem, they are hard to write and i have written a few myself.
    this one was absolutely awesome, a real treasure, keep writing.
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great job! I love it. 5/5 it's good that your trying something different too

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hi Letty

    Good to see you scribbling a haiku
    Well done for a first haiku.
    keep them coming..

    "I'm trying something different."

    -yep and thats the right way to get better and better, experiment on new forms of poetry, youll be surprise what your talent can give you.
    Just believe in your self.

    Misstress.

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