Sweetest Temptation [Triple Tetractys]

by Tammie   Oct 21, 2006


The
Sweetest
Temptation,
With a sour
After taste. Reminding you of your sin.
Initial sweet tastes of sugar subside,
Leaving lemon
Lingering
In your
Mouth.
This
Teaches
A lesson
To not give in
To the sweetest temptation of all: Love.

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Tetractys consist of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables. A triple tectractys is: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10

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  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    This is brilliant i luv how u used another style of poetry in which less talented people lyk me cant do as good as normal lol if that makes sense
    it was great

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great! I didn't know what to expect at first, but once you ended it in a clear understandable way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great job by you, and thank you very much for your kind support of other members in the site, without ppl like you there s no reason to be here and try to write new staff, i really want to say i do appriciate your kindness.....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Great poem..this shows brilliance in you! Honestly...Now I want to make one..hmm 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, and it really not good to give in to all temptations...GP

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