Comments : What can a white lie do?

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    Nice poem, you did a greqat job, its hard to rite short poems. Ive done a few myself and really struggled (check old account: Fredaeya). 5/5, well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    "It doesn't mattered"
    [It doesn't matter]
    - Never add -ed (or any other endings) to an end of words just to make them rhyme.

    Short, but well written. YOu did a good job with this poem.