by Daniel Rutter Oct 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Lying here all alone, |
Wow...I'd give anything to hold you. What a powerful wish. That is amazing, this poem is amazing, |
by Freddie
I luv thelast stansa best, it ties it all together. Adding that extra line after it was just the icing on the cake. keep writing. 5/5. |