Comments : Anything To Hold You

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    I luv thelast stansa best, it ties it all together. Adding that extra line after it was just the icing on the cake. keep writing. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Wow...I'd give anything to hold you. What a powerful wish. That is amazing, this poem is amazing,
    keep writing and taking people's breath away..