by Tammie
That is an awesomely written poem. The first stanza, i know how you feel when you get all shaky. I don't have anorexia, but i get that feeling sometimes when i don't get to eat. I like how each stanza talks about something different. The first about how you feel, the second how you look, and the third about Ana and you. I love how you wrote about Ana being your friend. It made it a very strong poem. I haven't read one so good about this topic before i don't think. Excellent job. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Autuumnbree
Very good poem, I can kinda relate but I'm more on the other side. I like how you express the emotions and feeling of this hopless soul...GP |
by aliiiii
Oh god, it's so true. I used to be on that eating binge. Don't worry. Not the only one. 5/5. Thanks much for commenting on my poem! |
by Georgia
I really loved the poem prob cuz im sitting here feeling all those thing while reading them wired ay... anyway thanx 4 the comments means alot xoxoxo |
by Donavin
Man that was excellent again... all your poems have so much emotion and hurt i wish i could write like that |
by Tiffany
WHOA, that was reli insightful. well done! |