Yes, I like this poem, I know what you mean and what you are trying to say... but for some reason It gets really strong and powerful and when you think it is coming tot eh climax bit it just drops and disappears into another subject.... I don't know if that makes sence? but I don't know what the bottom bit means, is it about loving to be with that person and then when you have to leave each other you get both get sad? or is it like you have a realtionship and then you break up and then when you go back together again?.... omg im confused lol
=p anyway good poem,
love to hear more, which I am about to read more, hehe
love light xx
(fire) do u no who i am?
LOL