by ♥ Rejekted Oct 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Ever feel like your missing something. |
Great poem. But i felt like there should be more to it when i finished reading... add a moral or something at the end... Like: Thats the feeling of ....... Explain what you think that feeling is and why its there... After that, I think this poem will be perfect! |
by Lutu
REally really good! |