That feeling

by ♥ Rejekted   Oct 21, 2006


Ever feel like your missing something.
But you just dont know what it is
like you have everything you could possibly imagine
But theres still something not there.
Somethings still missing.
And its like no matter how much you try to fill
that hole in your heart
that feeling of emptiness is still there.
That feeling of loneliness is still there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great poem. But i felt like there should be more to it when i finished reading... add a moral or something at the end... Like: Thats the feeling of ....... Explain what you think that feeling is and why its there... After that, I think this poem will be perfect!
    Wonderful job though!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lutu

    REally really good!