Great job. I loved it.

Yea its not your best, but its still pretty darn good! youve got some blossoming talent, i tell ya. i wish i could write like you! but now the poem (lol):

Every time I look in your eyes,
My heart flutters, a great surprise.
I feel hope, but then I recall,
It was you that made me fall.

I hate how this is where you still feel the same happy way, and then you remember what really happened. I think even if it wasnt a breakup, most people can identify this with any failed relationship. great job! 5/5