World Of Emotions

by Simply Complex   Oct 21, 2006


Suddenly,
The gray clouds clash
In the world of emotion
The rain falls fast
Causing a commotion

The turmoil inside
Breaks you down slow
You eyes start to water
Friends to turn to foe.

Then,
The sky opens up
In the world of emotion
The sun shines bright
Lessening the commotion

Everything clears
Your eyes are now open
Your smiles is brighter
Again you start hoping

Rumbling,
The volcano erupts
In the world of emotion
The anger pours out
Starting again the commotion

Your blood boils with rage
Your eyes tint red
Your defenses kick up
As the bull rears its head

Silence,
Surrounds you
In the world of emotion
Everything dies
Forever ceasing the commotion

The clouds disappear
The sun burns out
The volcano stops rumbling
As silence comes about. . .

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--MeL

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Hey i rlly love this poem. thanks a lot for the comment. keep writing. =)
    sarah~

  • Lovely!! i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    You've one 'eck of a talent there mel!

    very good solid piece, you should post some more! =)

    5/5 keep 'em coming!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    Love the imagery. awesome analagous poem with great flow and emotion. if any1 gives this poem less than 5/5 they can't read

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! I really like this. I was drawn in from the first stanza. Great poem! I like the flow of it and the rhymes. Keep them up! xx