Hey, excellent poem really creates a picture of the ocean shore its just proves you dont have to rhyme in poems to make them great :) keep it up

Monika,

Thank you for the positive feedback.

I get a lot of ideas and I have to write them down quickly to print before I forget.
There are so many possible when we write.

I am so happy you enjoyed reading my poem, I created something and established communication with another
human being. It makes me feel great inside to know this!

The sound of an ocean shore provides something magic for everyone!

All we have to do is get the right combination of words together to express our inner thoughts.

For some reason, I have this amazing ability to create many title, but I cannot write it down fast enough!

So, keep sharing.

Please read some more of my other poetry and comment. Tell a friend too!

Communication is the key!

FireFly747