Comments : It Wasn't Enough

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    If you go into the Poetry Websites and contests section on here, the contests are in there. Click discussion at the top, it is next to chat and faq.

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Well emotions write As clouds gather in the evening, prelude to a summer's rain, the same way your feelings grow.....well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Woah! Now that is a poem that makes you think! I guess no matter how bad things seem they always can get a lot worse. So tragic and heartbreaking. Excellant write, left me speechless for ages, had to read it twice!! 5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This made me feel anger to the driver of the car and it felt so real and true this is what happens every day and you expressed it so carefully and well wow lovin your poems this has got to be the best so far.

    my fav stanza

    'After a few rounds of the hard stuff
    She still recalls her frustration
    So she grabs her purse and her car keys
    Unknowing of her destination'.

    the rhyming here must have been so difficult to work out some good flow but you pulled it off xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    OMG WOW..thats all I can say. You have some true talent! this poem gave me goose bumps!!! nice work!
    *amy*

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Powerful write. alcohol ruins lives. i have seen it first hand from more than one angle. 5/5