It's great that you refer to yourself as just a girl in the poem, because there are billions of people out there who don't matter to us, if somebody we don't know or never met dies we feel no pain or sorrow. to most you are just a girl but to some you are far more then that amazing poem i loved it 5/5 and thanks for the comments keep it up

Excellent poem. Loved the topic, great word usage too.

Loved the poem, it has a great topic and really made me think.
5/5 x

Great poem it has a good topic to it and ur a great writter and yep well i give you a 5/5

*~victoria~*

Excellent! I loved it soo much!
xoxo

Better than ever.

I loved this poem so much. You did and excellent job !! I can really relate to this. Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading.
* Steph *

Hey this poem is almost how i feel about myself that our lifes seem so big to us big in the real world it not on the big and there are soo many people in world and were not even a spot in the world. Great Poem i love it!! Keep up the awesome work!! :)

I lOVE IT!! tO me gawjus yoO R my girl!! ILY!! this poem was enjoyable to read because it's really meaningful and yoO put alot of thought into it.

This poem was gud wen u read it in english & it's gud now really capturing wat it feels lyk in a society lyk ours dat u don't want 2 do da same as every1 else u wanna b rmbrd 4 doin something great & changing the world 4 da gud not 4 bein da most "popular" girl in hi skool or worse not bein rmbrd @ all
Luvin it

p.s u no me bettr den dat don't u no I dont giv wat ppl think abot me so no crash diet wsn't abot me lol no need 2 worries but luv da support lol

Love it! "I'm just another girl lost, longing to belong In a crowd of a million identities" A lot of girls think that way, and I don't think a lot would be able to describe it like that. Good job. 5/5
- Miko