by Rafael Navarro Mar 17, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the darkness |
by Liz
Loved the way you wrote this. So deep and full of strong emotions. I liked the repition in it a lot as well. Excellent write. I loved it. Just one small mistake I see, though....In the title. It should be "Happiness, Anger, Confusion". Other than that. Great poem!! 5/5 |
Wow so long, but I like it. its full of emotion. great work:) |
Wow good work, really great poem! |