Comments : Mother of all

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now thats a lovely dedication, very nicely written

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey thanks for entering this poem in my contest :).. this poem made me feel so sad because it was so sad to know that you had lost your own mother.. I'm so sorry to hear that, and i hope you're staying strong. I like this poem a lot because you described your mother in detail and put some creative ideas in there like.. "Death swept its arms around her
    and pulled her away" .. and.. "Some women make quilts,
    She made families".. and.. "She took people, individuals
    and tied them together".

    This poem is beautiful, keep it and treasure it forever :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Awesome poem you did a fantastic job once again lol thanks for the poem i like this poem alot lol good job

    keenan