Although the word choice is excellent, I can't get this poem to flow well, no matter which way I read it. I even tried reading it aloud to see if that would work. Your rhymes work well though, they don't seem forced at all. 5/5

This reminds me of a traditional poem because of the vocab i did like it but perhaps it could have been a bit longer. The words you did use however were so powerfull and i thik this had hidden meaning xxx alex xxx (1)

I like this poem, because it was really meaningful. The words used fit really well and the flow was good. well done
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So much emotion! I can't say how much i love this poem!!! I love how you used the old english wordings, they made it flow so well! Well written!!! 5/5

I love the words you used. Not everyone can pull off the old poetry style that Shakespear used, but you did very well at it. Well done.

I would be lying if I said I fully understood what they poem was saying, but still it is great.

This poem has a great medievel ring to it
I am speechless ..can't find the words to do it justice so I WILL START WITH MASTERPIECE!!

I dont quite understand this poem, and i find it hard to grasp the consept.. but i loved the way you wrote it, and the vocab you used b=made this poem unique, you are a great writer.
Please read and comment on my poems, thanks...Kirsty xx

Wonderful poem! Great descriptions and use of vocabulary, I can't even begin to explain how gripped I was reading this piece. It was very emotional and moving, and I was so dissapointed to see it end. God bless. 5/5