Partners Down Below

by Sarah Ann   Oct 22, 2006


Be my friend, and take my hand
Help the unfortunate and needy
Cater to me, furnish my life
My heart is shattered but still greedy

Cry me a river, comfort me
Pour relief onto my ache
Love me for who I am today
Not for the life you wish to take

Hold me tight and wrap me up
Soothe my soul and cherish well
I know where we are headed
But at least it's warm in hell

((I didn't know what category this poem should be in, so I put it here. With any good suggestions i'll move it.))

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Good job! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Heh heh heh...

    I must say, with no offense meant, that this stanza did make me laugh a little.

    Hold me tight and wrap me up
    Soothe my soul and cherish well
    I know where we are headed
    But at least it's warm in hell

    Another wonderful piece of work. Another 5 of 5.

    Kind Regards,
    Luna

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Very original write. I loved the ending. This was such a great read. I always wanted to write a poem similar to this but you have done it amazingly.
    Keep your original ideas coming it is nice and refreshing to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very well written. 5/5 sorry i have not much to say but I got a lot of more comments to do. => thank you very much for being one of them though!

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    An exceptional poem I personally would put it in the love poems section but then I have my own issues in life lol. I really enjoyed the imagery in this piece and will be back to read more of your stuff.
    Tim

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