I'm not sure who 'she' is, but I love the poem lol... The parts about the storm were my favorite-- it made her seem like an angry child, but then the ending makes her seem all-powerful.

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This was bloody amazing wow so powerful im glad you asked to read your poems now i couldnt give any tips because this is fine as it is xxx alex xxx (2)

That was so beautifully written. I loved the words used. It flowed so well, keep it up, my friend
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I'm not sure who she is... I would have said Mother Nature but you incorporated her into the poem in a different way. Still, whoever she is, this poem is so true! I have fallen in love with it! You are an outstanding writer! 5/5!!!

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Once again, truely beautiful. You are very talented. I enjoyed reading this, I hope you can keep this up!

Now this is really unique, just loved the way you potrayed the whole theme, great write indeed

all the best and take care

Well that is beautiful, excellent. It seems to symbolise the changing of the seasons, autumn bringing the downfall and then winter bringing death followed by spring where it is reborn and summer where is shines. The giving over from old to new. It seems to resemble the wiccan calander with the god and goddess. Maybe I am wrong but the visual images are strong and over all the poem is beautiful.

This is an amazing poem My assumption is this poem is so profoundly inspired it is ambiguous in content, and it could have easily been posted under another poem type.. great choice of words... Powerful personifacation of mother nature should persuade us to protect our environment

excellent delivery

That is amazing beyond description. I LOVED it! I don't even know how to make this all go into words! I congratulate you!
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