Destined to Fall Apart

by Bridgette   Oct 22, 2006


I don't think the stars
Have ever shined so bright
As that one night with you
That seems so long ago

We were so in love
Yet broken inside
Who would have thought
We'd end up falling apart

I remember like it was yesterday
It was just you and me
My heart beat my love for you
But my mind kept telling me 'no'

I never wanted to fall in love
I didn't ever want to care
But everything changed that night
That our love was shared

But now that night is just a memory
Clouded by hate and deceit
Watching the stars fade away
And admitting our love's defeat

It was fate that brought us together
Yet we were destined to fall apart
But I'll always look to that night
And know you still have my heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Your poems are so great, you have an adorable talent, keep writing as i really enjoy reading them, another 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    This poem reminds me of my boyfriend and I.
    It's beatuiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Ok, very very sad. Everything flowed great and great choice of wording in this one too. You're a very talented writer and you described things in your poems very well. 5/5 Keep it up! Thx for the comment too! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    So true i really can relate to this poem sometimes i dont know if im wasting my life away with my possesive bf but i love him trapped thats me lol i do love his company though xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Awww... how sad yet sort of sweet... i felt the emotions you portrayed here... it had a nice delivery... the flow was great and i loved your last stanza!! hmm... thats all i can say about this poem... it left me almost speechless... because if i was speechless... then there would be no comment... haha! :p keep writing!

    ~angel~

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