by Idiosyncratic Oct 22, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
When, once upon a night so calm |
by Vanessa
Wow applause that was... I am spechless. The word choice just blew me away, the vocab, definalty enhanced this powerful write. the emtion was dark, and perhaps a little twisted, the rhyme only felt forced in a couple of places, perfectly penned, well 5/5 again |
by Kaila
The vocabulary in this poem sorta through me off a bit I kinda got confused reading it hehe but that's just me |
by Unrequited
I don't know if I can keep reading your poetry, because as I keep reading, I feel so much more emotion drain out of my body. THAT is how much your poems move me. I have no idea how you are able to create such sad, moving, creative stories with your pen, but I just cannot get enough of it. Please... Keep writing!! :) |
by David
The story it told was wonderful! really brought out how much you can write and wat capabilites you can do! you are a very talented poet. keep writing, well done. |
by Tricky Daze
It was a different and imaginery requring poem but you did an excellent job on this,it deserves a 5 |