The Ballad of Lost Hopes

by Idiosyncratic   Oct 22, 2006


When, once upon a night so calm
A maiden found to her alarm
A hole had settled near her heart
A warming fluid soaked her arm

And what, but would she come to find
Was wound and very near entwined
Around her fingers, but so dear
Was the sharpened patience of her mind

Just as she began to rise
Her patience came to take her eyes
And, when she could not see at all
The devil visited, in disguise

He grasped her hair in rotten hand
Pulled her up so she would stand
Near the window, very near
And pushed her forward as he planned

But the poor maiden, as she fell
Found her vision and sighted hell
This was not what the devil planned
The weakened maiden began to rebel

The devils' heart began to seep
Because, by no fair, longing leap
Of the mind, did he predict
That the maiden was only asleep

And as the devil watched in mirth
The heavens, hell, and (nearly) earth
Fell from their positions
And lost their worth

Oh, how the devil laughed that day
To watch the gods pure skin decay
But, as he laughed with wholesome mirth
The devil met his own dismay

What had the maiden left to do?
Well, though what had happened was quite taboo
She laid her head on an ashen pillow
And took a nap, a rest anew

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow applause that was... I am spechless. The word choice just blew me away, the vocab, definalty enhanced this powerful write. the emtion was dark, and perhaps a little twisted, the rhyme only felt forced in a couple of places, perfectly penned, well 5/5 again

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    The vocabulary in this poem sorta through me off a bit I kinda got confused reading it hehe but that's just me

  • 17 years ago

    by Unrequited

    I don't know if I can keep reading your poetry, because as I keep reading, I feel so much more emotion drain out of my body. THAT is how much your poems move me. I have no idea how you are able to create such sad, moving, creative stories with your pen, but I just cannot get enough of it. Please... Keep writing!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The story it told was wonderful! really brought out how much you can write and wat capabilites you can do! you are a very talented poet. keep writing, well done.

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was a different and imaginery requring poem but you did an excellent job on this,it deserves a 5