Comments : Dream a dreamt

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Oh such lovely lovely words thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Awww... this is such a sweet and heartfelt write. I can definitely relate to this. You did an amazing job. The flow and rhythm was great and it held up very well. You did an absolutely beautiful job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    Another job well done. It's nice to find a rhyming poet who rhymes with good rhythm and not the mish-mash of syllables I find so often. I like the way that you always seem to bring the poem together solidly with the final stanza(s). 5/5 again.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    If this is just a dream I dreamt
    Then take me in my sleep
    For this is just the type of dream
    That I would like to keep

    this one just took my breath away, its just so heartfelt and so beautifully dedicated to the one you love

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    You expressed urself really good here. keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    If this is just a dream I dreamt
    Then take me in my sleep
    For this is just the type of dream
    That I would like to keep

    These lines... wow. I love this poem. You pen such beauty. Keep up the amazing work.

    Kind Regards,
    Luna

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    If, by chance, this is a dream
    I never want to wake
    To lose you now would simply be
    Too much for me to take.

    ^^ That was so sweet it makes my heart melt! It was the best part of the poem for me because thats how I feel at times...little things are a lot of pressure on me and loseing someone is to much to take for me as well..I could really relate there

    This was truly an amazing piece, which of course I don't have to tell you because you know that by all these lovely people giving your praise for it!
    I love your poems...its always a pleasure to read them!
    Chelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I really enjoyed reading this. More, more I say!

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    You really have a way with writing lovely, romantic poems that really speaks from the heart
    and touches any heart that would read
    in between lines.

    Keep up the good work as always.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is another beautiful poem by you hun. You never cease to amaze me. Whenever I read one of your poems I get lost in the beautiful picture that you create. Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww, such a touching, wonderful piece. Your words are truly amazing, I am awestruck at the beauty of this piece. Perfect imagery and words, I pictured the very loving scene. Please, enlighten us all and write many more brilliant poems such as this. Take care, and God bless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    The way you wrote this, truely makes every girl wish they were the girl you loved!.. I for one, can't wait to meet someone that has this ability to not only tell me how they feel, but make me feel it as well!..(YOU HAVE IT) Truely AMAZING!..

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was a very well written poem. You can definitely woe a lady with this sort of piece. I am very impressed! It's good to see other guys with kind hearts and romantic thoughts.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jax x lyn

    Amazing write! Wow! That was positively superb! Even better, I just can't really think of anything to say about it. It was one of the poems I've read that have really stuck in my mind. Wow. I can't say anything more! Congrats, it's a work of art!
    [*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet melody

    Wow, this is AMAZING! I loved every word and by just reading this it was as if I could feel how you felt about her. She is one lucky girl! Keep up the good work!
    ~Take Care!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You have written an amazing piece of poetry yet again. Your love poems seem to be really thoughtful, sweet, capturing and heartfelt. Every word was deep and went straight to the heart. Well done with these poems you are also very talented. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by melissa

    I must say that you are simply amazing!! you have become my favorite poet by far!! keep up the excellent work!! i look forward to reading more!!