Oh such lovely lovely words thank you |
by Bridgette
Awww... this is such a sweet and heartfelt write. I can definitely relate to this. You did an amazing job. The flow and rhythm was great and it held up very well. You did an absolutely beautiful job on this! 5/5 |
by Minkus
Another job well done. It's nice to find a rhyming poet who rhymes with good rhythm and not the mish-mash of syllables I find so often. I like the way that you always seem to bring the poem together solidly with the final stanza(s). 5/5 again. |
If this is just a dream I dreamt |
by dora
You expressed urself really good here. keep it up xx |
by x.Athame.x
If this is just a dream I dreamt |
by Chelsey
If, by chance, this is a dream |
by Lindsay
I really enjoyed reading this. More, more I say! |
by Misstress
You really have a way with writing lovely, romantic poems that really speaks from the heart |
by Letty
This is another beautiful poem by you hun. You never cease to amaze me. Whenever I read one of your poems I get lost in the beautiful picture that you create. Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 |
by Sarah Ann
Aww, such a touching, wonderful piece. Your words are truly amazing, I am awestruck at the beauty of this piece. Perfect imagery and words, I pictured the very loving scene. Please, enlighten us all and write many more brilliant poems such as this. Take care, and God bless. |
by Amanda
The way you wrote this, truely makes every girl wish they were the girl you loved!.. I for one, can't wait to meet someone that has this ability to not only tell me how they feel, but make me feel it as well!..(YOU HAVE IT) Truely AMAZING!.. |
by Darien
Wow, this was a very well written poem. You can definitely woe a lady with this sort of piece. I am very impressed! It's good to see other guys with kind hearts and romantic thoughts. |
by Jax x lyn
Amazing write! Wow! That was positively superb! Even better, I just can't really think of anything to say about it. It was one of the poems I've read that have really stuck in my mind. Wow. I can't say anything more! Congrats, it's a work of art! |
by sweet melody
Wow, this is AMAZING! I loved every word and by just reading this it was as if I could feel how you felt about her. She is one lucky girl! Keep up the good work! |
by Melpomene
You have written an amazing piece of poetry yet again. Your love poems seem to be really thoughtful, sweet, capturing and heartfelt. Every word was deep and went straight to the heart. Well done with these poems you are also very talented. ~mel |
by melissa
I must say that you are simply amazing!! you have become my favorite poet by far!! keep up the excellent work!! i look forward to reading more!! |