Yes, our souls do struggle on each and every day...... another powerful write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I like this-it is original and flows well with a great use of language.The meaning is fantastic and well stated-our souls always struggle between good and evil, right and wrong.We can only do the best we can while being true to ourselves.Life is a constant struggle.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

I really love the words u used very creative and i was enjoy very excellent job god bless

WOW Jason and you said you were new at writing? Well, if so you have a natural talent for poetry. This is incredible! Powerful, great rhythm, and an intriguing choice of words... Awesome piece! ;o)

Very nice. the struggle is represented well and the word choice is awesome. great job!

Haha, hello Jason.
Thank you very much for your comment on "Hells trap". It was rather humerous and cought my fancy, thank you very much! Deff made me smile, and traps are harder to avoid than you think, it's like they ly in waiting for the perfect opportunity to embarrase you! :P

This poem is quite good, i enjoyed reading it! Going to read more!!!

- Lanie.