by Evelyn Oct 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Jeez...i feel so stupid |
by Rain
I liked the emotion that you expressed in your poem. to put you anger and hate into words is hard to do at times but you did a good job. keep writing |
Wow...you finally wrote another poem!! i still like your first one best..but this one is soooo good also...i really like your last two lines they are very well said...i'll keep wating for you to write more...keep up the great work |