Great poem but it could use another stanza in the middle... it just seems too short to get the meaning and emotion out. Otherwise its awesome!

xxEvilAngelxx

Ya when u said that i looked back at it and it doesnt seem as complete as it could be...thanks for the advice

Woa dude. You lettin ppl start pushin you around now..Im just flippin kidding ahahaha. Awesome poem. Love it.

Lmao wow...