Wow, very good! You described everything so well, you had a great flow, it was just perfect all over. My favorite stanza was the last one because you're saying you're basically better than him and you won't stoop as low as him. Great job! 5/5 Keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

This was a great poem. I love how it describes someone who is strong and rised above someones plan to destroy them. Fab. 5/5

Kelly
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Great poem!

Another great poem by a great poet, 5/5

You go! Woot woot! >.< Well done on the emotion in this. I actually believed that you were going to give him up. As in some other poems, they give me the impression that they want him back.

The only thing that bothered me about this one was that the flow was off. I didn't feel 100% comfotable with it, but could still read through it. Catch my drift? But other than that, it was perfect. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha