Wow Lexi, this poem has definatly produced some questions to congitate upon.

Are we strong enough to grow
And face our evil deeds
Will love ever be the key to
Fill our endless needs
^^
Amazing stanza I must say !

Thank-you for sharing your words.
I wait in anticipation of your next write.

Take care, Luanne

I see nohting wrong with your poem.

when i write a poem i become lost in the world that doen't exist. i write what is in my heart not what is in my mind that way my hand folw on a paper none stop. tyr it maybe it will work for you. please reply.

Wow this is amazing for me. ilove the way u write excellent job!

And you say you're new to poetry? Bull! What I mean by that is that you're a natural at it. I've been writing poetry for years. That doesn't make me an expert, but trust me on this. If you are indeed new to poetry, then it's rare to find someone just starting out with your talent.